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Brand directions under review

The live homepage now carries Brandon's V1 copy; every earlier draft is kept below for reference. Walk any of them top to bottom like a first-time visitor would, then tell us where it sings and where it buzzes wrong.

The brand pages →The identities themselves — logo, color, type, voice, the blend concepts, and the business card boards awaiting your feedback.

Client V1 — the live homepageCurrent
Brandon's revised copy on the field-guide visual system: the hive reframed, the 5 S's (Scout · Secure · Shape · Send · Survey), his real coming-home story, and the new 5-S sample Scout Report.
The Waggle DanceStory version
The story-led draft that previously lived on the homepage — Alpine Dusk palette, the flight path, the dance told out loud. Kept for reference.
Field GuideIllustrated
GPT's field-guide concepts made real: an illustrated Flagstaff landscape hero (red rock through the pines, the train, the scout route), the wayfinding reframe — the route is missing, not the business — quarters as the town's four seasons, and the artifact board carrying our real mocks and live form.
FusionBig-type candidate
GPT's page skeleton (big type, sticky nav, quote-led sting, Scout→Shape→Send→Learn timeline, checklist-beside-form, FAQ) fused with our substance: real artifact mocks, the sample Scout Report as the hero object, honest proof, and the live form.
Launch candidateGPT-review response
The GPT-review response: artifact sample quarter, compressed proof with a trust bridge to a real sample Scout Report, and plain what/when/who answers before the form. No placeholders in the footer.
The sample Scout ReportThe product, demonstrated
Brandon's new 5-S sample for the fictional Pinecone café — Scout, Secure, Shape, Send, Survey, with owner quotes, named gaps, and the bottom line in plain English. The exact document a prospect gets free.
Artifact-firstWork in progress
Same story, half the words: the sample quarter is shown as real creative — an Instagram reel, an email to the regulars, a sidewalk sign — instead of descriptions.
Original (v1)For reference
Where we started: the first build with the placeholder pine-and-honey palette and long-form copy.